Notes

Overall note: there was much more commitment and complicity with listening and responding which influences your character .

• playing the moment was much more evedent.
• go back over script adding in detail and looking back.
• good energy and for the first time there was real character and a sense of purpose.
• give moments of space during the begining to enforce the meaning and message of the piece to the audience.
• be proud of our job as a librarian
• keep the "oh" in the book scene.
• move the bookcase after young eveis re-exits to the tree scene.
• be more secure on "war" speech.