Tuesday, 6 January 2015

Adding to the Hospital scene

Today the libraians went off to see if we could add some more narrative to the story now that we no longer need any of the prisoner of war scene. Because of this we have to suggest in the speech that he was missing and what she started to do as a nusre to imply the passing of time. Here is the scen that we finished up with in the end:

Alfie had disapeared,
His letters stopped,
she assumed the worst...
(pause)
Evie decided to keep busy.
She enrolled to become a nurse at the Queen Victoria Hospital.
Not wanting to think about alfie of what had happend to him.
(Evies solo dance)
untill... a patient was admitted into her care,
Having been taken by the red cross during the battle of Dunkirk,
Suffering a broken tibia, sharapnel related injuries and a sever concusion.
(small pause)
Six months after seh thought he was dead, they were re-united.

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